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Tallgeese-Zero ver.A2 by a2ure Tallgeese-Zero ver.A2 by a2ure
OZ-00MS-0X Tallgeese-Zero

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Model number: OZ-00MS-0X
Code name: Tallgeese-Zero
Unit type: mobile suit
Manufacturer: OZ(Organization of Zodiac)
Operator: OZ
First deployment: no data available
Accommodation: pilot only, in standard cockpit in torso
Dimensions: overall height 20.1 meters
Weight: empty 9.2 metric tons; max gross weight unknown (?)
Armor materials: neo-titanium alloy
Powersource: ultracompact fusion reactor
Equipment and design features: "Zero System" combat computer/pilot interface in cockpit; sensors
Fixed armaments: 2 x hi-dober gun, clip-fed, mounted on both shoulder; 2 x beam saber, stored in recharge racks in shield, hand-carried in use; shield, can be folded to hand's back when using hi-dober gun


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Doing another MSV(Mobile Suit Variation). Using term 'ver.A2' because i'm not sure if there's already anyone who create 'Tallgeese-Zero', since the idea of Tallgeese using zero system is not that rare. Don't ask me about the unreasonable weight, i just adapted the original Tallgeese (see this ->[link])

critiques and comments please:nod:(please help me improve)


MSV by :icona2ure:(me) based on =>Tallgeese of Gundam series

Tallgeese from Gundam series(c) Sunrise/Bandai/Sotsu Agency
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:iconlockondynames:
lockondynames Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Looks cool, I really like how kind of angular you made it. It works well.
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SeverFlameSkullRage Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012
Can you draw a praying mantis gundam? That would be epic!
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:iconzanruos:
zanruos Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2011
nice dude i am making a tallgeese mk 2 right now trying to make it more areodynamic but haveing fun with designs
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a2ure Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sorry for the late reply...
glad you like it, and good luck with your tallgeese :salute:
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zanruos Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2011
thxs u an see the pic of the head in my gallery
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orihalchon Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2010  Student Filmographer
wih! boleh juga nih ^^

bikin versi Tallgeese III-nya donk, ok coy?

:ahoy:
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a2ure Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
tengkyu^^

talgeese III? hmmm...nanti2 kali, masi ada beberapa yang sedang dalam tahap pengerjaan=D
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Seraphiczero Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010
This is really good. I'm glad you went with the colors of the original Goose. =p

I think from this point on you can improve by being more careful with symmetry, perspective, and the straightness of your lines. For instance, the lines and symmetry in the thighs and skirt can be improved. If you look at the two shoulder armor plates, they are not the same symmetrically.

I understand what you were going for, but I think you made the left leg a little too long. I also have no idea what's going on with those little things hanging off the side of its legs. =3

And this is just me, but I would increase the contrast and make the shading on your white parts darker. I love using white on mechs, but I've learned that putting high contrast on it helps it look less monotone.

Again, I still really like this drawing. I'm just pointing out the things you may want to focus on in future projects. Constructive criticism, right? =)
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a2ure Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yay! right!! this is what I need, buddy...thanks :salute:

you pointed most of my weakness there, I'm trying to find some tutorials and tips regarding those things...I already try to use guide lines, as some of my friends suggest, for the perspective but it still didn't turns out right (as you can see the left leg still kinda too long and all...=(). Another way is to make the basic shape(cube, sphere, etc) for all parts, that way someone told me that I could get better perspective, but somehow I can't do the mecha right that way... And for the straightness of lines, I got this tip;"just concentrate on the start and end point of the line when you do lining", but when I try that my lines got mostly deviated(?)(especially the long ones)...Thanks for the shading tips, If you know another tips to improve them please let me know...awww!! I still need a whole lot of practice:XD:

those litle things on the legs sides are supposedly 'extra thruster'(?), practically useless I guess, just found some mechs with the same feature and found it kinda cool=D

Now I get pumped! gonna draw moaar!!:salute:
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Seraphiczero Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2010
Huh...not that I really get it right nowadays, but I guess I just eyeball the perspective. If it looks messed up, I just fix it the best I can. =/

I do my best to draw the entire mech's proportion and posture before adding in any sorts of detail at all. This makes the major fixes easy without erasing all of your delicate work.

I guess I just have a real eye for symmetry. Basically, for EVERY line you draw, look for other lines on the mech it is related to. There are other lines that should be the same length, and there are lines that should be parallel with it.

I do okay with straight lines, but my method is a real pain in the ass:

Of course determine start and end points. To draw a straight line, I need a lot of stability for my hand. I use my elbow as an anchor and a pivot point. When you draw a line like this, it is not a perfect straight line, but is instead an arc with a small curve. And arc with small curve approximates a straight line, so you just have to "undo" the curve slightly.

I also tend to use small, short pencil strokes, but I'm told this is a bad habit, haha. This helps me quickly change the direction of a line if I feel it's crooked.

I also adjust lines by thickening them and thinning them out. This can slightly "nudge" them into the right place and thickness.

Otherwise, it's just time and practice. I like to do things the hard way, if you notice. =/

By the way, what language are you guys speaking?? I have no idea.

I'm looking forward to your future works. Curious to see if my advice helps, lol.
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a2ure Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okay, this sure is useful advices, thanks=D

Actually the way I hold my pen is kinda...umm...unusual, I guess...and that make it harder for me to gain stability, but it's already like a habit and such a pain to change. I guess changing the pivot point will work, though...

My native language is 'Bahasa Indonesia', though most of the comments here are slangy(?) and hard to translate using transtool =P
Sorry, I know my English is such a mess, but I guess people can still guess it roughly, right?
:iconrelievedplz:

Actually I'm working on Freedom Gundam right now and gonna do Zeta next. Maybe you'll see most improvement on Zeta since Freedom is already inked the time I get some advices from you and some other friends. Wish me able to post them around Sunday-Monday...:salute:
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Seraphiczero Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2010
Do you draw with your feet or something?? XD I'm just teasing you.

Oh, don't apologize for your English. I was just wondering what language this was. Apparently all of my watchers can write it but I have no idea what's going on, lol.

I'm looking forward to your new works. Good luck. =o
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a2ure Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nawh! I draw with my teeth!! X3 lolz

Ohkay...
It's looks like you need to wait a bit longer for that, I still have not finished Freedom yet even now-___-a
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:iconcryptanth:
cryptanth Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010  Hobbyist Artist
*_*
bagus XD
btw tumben line artnya agak kasar
*ngga bisa komen yang lain*
:iconimdeadplz:
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:icona2ure:
a2ure Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ini gambar scannan 200dpi di paste di template 300dpi disave di 300dpi, jadi ngeresizenya ga banyak, kayanya makanya itu kasarnya keliatan=(

thanx favenya=D
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GreatGodoftheMoon Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2010
ehhhhhh, No reason in updating an old mobile suit. Trieze was a moron for constructing the Tallgeese II as it was.
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a2ure Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
cool down, then how if this thing was built not long after the original Tallgeese, Zero system introduced not long after that too afterall (as i could remember from my source mahq)

(sorry for the late reply)
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GreatGodoftheMoon Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010
Was't really heated up, just dont understand the reasoning behind the Tallgeese Zero, let's take what we know. The Wing Gundam and Tallgeese's base frames were remarkably similar, right? Not only that, but The Tallgeese also had remarkable mobility, as the Wing did in it's bird mode. They are essentially, /essentially/ the same machine, just different cosmetics and skin composites. The Zero System was build before any of the original five Gundams, as the Wing Zero was mostly constructed, it was just that the Zero system was introduced to the world that late is all. I'm not really a fan of any AU series to begin with, my loyalty lies with UC.
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NoviceArtist487 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2010
This is pretty awesome!!
:D
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:icona2ure:
a2ure Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks...(for the :+fav: too) =D

(sorry for the late reply)
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:iconaffa-the-great:
Affa-the-Great Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ver. A2 for version A2ure :D
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:icona2ure:
a2ure Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yup, just like ver.Ka for 'version Katoki'
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:iconxperimental00:
Xperimental00 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Sleek. Looks awesome with two Doberguns. ^^
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a2ure Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks...(for the :+fav: too)

I feel that I'm still no good with weapon though...

(sorry for the late reply)
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Xperimental00 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome, and no need for apologies :D. You did well with the guns here actually. There's just a few misaligned lines in the right (observer's perspective) dobergun though.
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a2ure Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
true...again with the perspectives=( any tips?
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:iconxperimental00:
Xperimental00 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Let's see. Aha, try starting with a box for weapons, or for everything else for that matter. Use the first few lines of the box as guidelines. You won't probably be wrong. And make sure the box is just about the same size as the part it represents. :)
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:icona2ure:
a2ure Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hmmm...Okay, worth trying;)
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:iconxperimental00:
Xperimental00 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Good luck. ^^
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Seig-Warheit Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hmm thrusternya kurang panjang de prasaan, klw ga salah ampe pinggang... eh paha...

tp udah rapi ko :D
teruskan anaku!
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a2ure Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
weleh? kurang panjang tha? gambar referensi saia ga keliatan si ujung thrusternya sampe mana....sampe paha? bushed...panjang amat yak?...

terima kasih, saia akan berusaha lebih keras papaku=P

(sorry telat reply)
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Seig-Warheit Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha ieh soalnya wa punya model kitnya yg 1/144 jd tw sampe mn panjangnya =p
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:icona2ure:
a2ure Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
waw, model kit Tallgeese 1/144, hooh...udah susah tu nyarinya...ngiri...=(
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Seig-Warheit Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wah?
masa si?
wa beli waktu taun 2003 sih =p
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a2ure Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
2003? tunggu, ini Talgeese yang pertama apa yang III?
Saia nangkepnya Talgeese yang pertama nih...
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Seig-Warheit Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yang wa poenya ituh tallgeese III, tp pd dasarnya untuk ukuran thruster sama segituan, soalnya wa liat pamfletnya sih
haha
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a2ure Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ou...iya si, kalo Tallgeese III masi bisa dicari kayanya, kalo Tallgeese pertama bahkan gw ga tau ada modelnya apa ga

Sip2, oke dah
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ironscythe Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010
I have always said that I hate Gundam Wing, but for some strange reason, I have always loved the non-Gundam suits from the series. Especially the Leo/Tallgeese line.
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a2ure Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
indeed Gundams from Wing are kinda eccentric and too fancy...

Glad you like it...
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El-Bronco Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Perisainya agak kekecilan, kayaknya. Lebih dari itu, Manteps!
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a2ure Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks...sorry, telat reply...^^;

iya juga ya, shieldnya ga efektif ya...

Thanks juga :+fav:nya gan=D
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El-Bronco Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sip2 :) telat reply mah dah bukan hal yang aneh di DA mah :)
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eyetypher Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Kakinya panjaaang..:XD:
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a2ure Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
masi panjang ya? itu udah dipendekin dari gambar aslinya lho...

tapi kalo tallgeese emang imagenya berkaki panjang tho?
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eyetypher Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Iya.. Berarti anda berhasil membuat variasi Tallgeese sesuai image(kaki)nya.. :dance:
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:iconrekkou:
Rekkou Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
wuih ada proyek MSV? besok mau MSV dari X?
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:icona2ure:
a2ure Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yah itung2 buat latian, hmm....dari X boleh juga, siapa ya? Belphegor? tapi nanti2 kali, freedom sama zeta udah on the list ni...-_-;
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brett591 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010
very nice indeed i would
like to see zechs use this masterpeice
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a2ure Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks...
calling this a masterpiece is kinda exaggerating though...

and thanks for the :+fav: too=D
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Silverlion Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010
Very nice.
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